Matt Bellamy

Two p's in appreciation. I really like this. It's short, simple, but at the same time very descriptive. Also it's not too short - it doesn't leave us hanging. It ...

Right, I'll just get the technical bits out of the way - you put a couple of capital letters in there in random places, and this line - "won't change ...

I like the similes you used in this poem. However, I think you could extend these a little. For example, in the first line you compare prisoners to rainbows, and ...

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First I thought it was a joke, then as people started talking about it I thought I was wrong...turns out I wasn't wrong, everyone else was! *ego boost*

Argh, who dragged up this topic? I was absolutely useless! :lol: "Umbrella of my smile" is still a really pretty image.

o_0 This confused me for a sec... :lol:

Does anyone else find shallow seas of shame really hard to say?

Gyrfalcon, I think that's a good idea for a name, because I keep thinking you're a dude *blush* Sorry! :lol:

Do me! Do me!

It's not like the rules would make it extremely difficult for people to post their work - two good reviews is all it takes, and if people can't be bothered ...

Your Work Sucks! I'm kidding, of course :) Your Work's Super!

How very Myspace-ish :P Coolness.

It looks orange but it's not, it's red!

You Want Sausages! ... I find it amusing how many people want us to suffer :P